Paper about my theoretical orientation. Written- needs to be fixed with the following edits:Theoretical paper edits:Don’t have the same word (clients) in same sentence. ReworkWhen working with clients, cognitive behavior therapy concepts help me best conceptualize clientsThen you have the word clients in next sentence too—rework this. You can have a stronger intro(and third sentence has word clients 2x)Don’t abbreviate pt in the essays—you can say Ms. X or She. You also go back and forth with patient and client. Pick one and be consistentYou need to take a step back—there’s too much history here and I have to look hard to see what’s at the core for this woman. What is at the core and in 1-2 sentences how did it develop? Then, how does it play out in a maladaptive way in her life/how is it maintained and how are you addressing it.
